1樓：咫尺天涯不相識
i think i've changed a lot in the last few years. when i was a primary school student,i used to go right home and do my homework quickly after class. then i played computer games until my mother got back.
now, i'd like to do some sports after the class is over and then go home. and these days, i don't play computer games any longer, because i feel it's boring. i'm interested in doing some reading now.
in the last few years要用現在完成時態，
when the class over缺少動詞
2樓：來自沈家門漂亮的兔耳蘭
in the last few years,i thought i changed a lot.
i used to go rigt home and did my homework . then i playde computer games until my mother got back 這是語法錯誤 應是not...until until不能單獨使用 and these days i can't play computer games,so i feel it's boring.
總共三個錯誤吧
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